Adaptation Story (Revised)

So i realised that my previous story was… Boring. I have decided to revise the story a little, more like finish the previous one as it was unfinished.

So the story that I have so far is: A village, plunged into darkness and poverty by a corrupt leader and one person has gone off to the temple of the gods in the mountain to recover an item that will help them to free their village. (In a nutshell)

To make this story a little better and linked more to stargate, i have decided that the village is not lead by a corrupt earl, but are actually tormented by a group of aliens that visit once or twice a year to take people as slaves and stop them from becoming too powerful and fighting back and to show their superiority.

There is a legend that if someone is strong enough to climb the mountain and smart enough to decipher the code written on the wall, they would be met by the gods and receive what they seek.

The earl of the village has asked for a volunteer in seeking the truth behind this legend. Straight away his daughter volunteered, but the earl dismissed her aid as he didn’t think that she had the ability to complete the challenge. Knowing that there was little time before the aliens came back and that everyone was too scared to embark on such a quest, she leaves without the blessing of her father and the fate of the villages future resting firmly on her shoulders.

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